"PLING PLING"
Narratives need the extra flair of writing skills especially when it come to Story writing. Why not add the 'punch' with a 'Pow Wow' . ' Ouch', ' Thud', 'Kaboom.
I grew up reading the Amar Chitra Katha and Phantom comics and there is a distinct use of such Onomatopoeia there.
That afternoon, in my creative writing class, we were describing the 'Beep Beep' of the security check sensor but we did not just want to use Beep Beep, so we worked on ' Pling, Pling'. ' Bleep, Bleep'.
Creativity is thus seen in usage of innovative Onomatopoeia.
